Taste of Victory

Orion, winning a war is a punishment greater than death.

The tears in your sisters eyes have dried up crying Revolution, screaming so loud to be heard by the 13th century.
But not loud enough to let us hear her moans, because she’s sealed her bruises with remains of the black death, almost bronze in colour.

The Mongols had these spirit banners tied to the shaft of their spears, just below the blades. These ‘suldes’ would channel the power of nature to the warriors and take them towards their dreams.
But did not teach the warrior how to win. Because nature does not teach punishment.

I’ve drowned around all these spirit banners of the undead warriors around me, Orion.
Their dreams spoke of victory, their voices like rotten Roman monuments in my ears. All they asked of me was to not start a war again.

To not let my son know the taste of victory.

This photo is so pretty. Ufff I like it.

The poetry is a bit short but I liked writing it. What do you think? I was reading the Mongolian history and history of Genghis Khan which inspired me to write this.


Thanks(×infinity) for reading

Also, this is birthday weeekkk🎉😩

13 Comments Add yours

  1. Nour R. says:

    Hey Sid! I’m going to come back to read this properly but I just had to tell you happy birthday!!!
    I hope you had an awesome time today :3 What did you do? Did you get anything/did sumn special happen?
    Happy 19 ya old man 😂😂🥳🥳🥳

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Sid says:

      Dammit! I’m 19😩😩😩. Duude! I was planning for buying an art journal. You know those blank but cool and artistic ones. And one of my friends bought it for me 😭😭😭😭😭😭. I was so happy. I had a decent time but friends made it very awesome.

      Hope you had an awesome day too🥕🥕🥕❤️❤️❤️💟💟💟


      1. Nour R. says:

        About to hit the big 20 eh 😂 that’s so nice 🥺 I’m borrowing your friends 😂

        Eh well 😂

        Liked by 1 person

      2. Sid says:

        No. Can’t have em. You are my friend too. Borrow yourself. Wow that sounded like a 19 year old said it😂.

        I hope you have an tomato day tomorrow


      3. Nour R. says:

        No thank you I do NOT want to have myself as a friend 😂 idk I’ve two exams tomorrow that I’m not ready for and let’s just say this whole month sucked and I’m spirling to new underground levels

        Chile anyways 😂

        Liked by 1 person

      4. Sid says:

        Oooof😩. For me August sucked all the asses, lotsa lotsa stupid problems. Let’s see how September goes.

        Dragon emojis 🐲🐲🐲💝

        Liked by 1 person

  2. Yiena says:

    🎉Happy belated birthday dear🎉, with many heartfull sincere wishes of success and happiness and everything else you wish for~💖🥰

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Sid says:

    Thank you So much. We haven’t talked much yet this means a lot❤️❤️❤️💟💟💟. Have a great and a beautiful weekend❤️❤️


  4. cheriewhite says:

    Happy belated birthday! This was an awesome piece!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Sid says:

      Heyy!! Thank you SOO much. It means a lot 🌺🌺🌺✨

      Liked by 1 person

      1. cheriewhite says:

        You’re so welcome, Sid. 🙂

        Liked by 1 person

  5. Nour R. says:

    ‘Because nature does not teach punishment.’ OML. OML. OML *freaks out*
    “To not let my son know the taste of victory.” Don’t let Cherry know the bitter taste of survival *sobs*. Well such a twist on history. Why chu reading it btw? Your boi is reading phy and math stuff xD

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Sid says:

      You remember my kids nameee😩😭😩😭😩😭😩😭😭😩😭😩😭. That made my day or remaining of the night😍🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺. Thanknyou somuch♥️♥️♥️♥️.

      I don’t know why I’m reading about Genghis Khan tbh. I think because of a video game, Ghost of Tsushima. 😂♥️


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